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What can I ad to what the others have said... I also loved your Treasure,  very melodic and rhythmic,  Excellent my friend :-)

posted by Sinome on May 3, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

U always have rhythm,style,art...& I see clearly, a lot of heart.Nice beat

SHALOM FRIEND,

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 3, 2008 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on May 3, 2008 at 5:27 PM | link to this | reply

A very beautiful write, keep sharing. From my  to your .

posted by cmhnord on May 3, 2008 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

I didn't waht to get off the ship
Beautiful! perfectly written.Solita

posted by ace2inspire on May 3, 2008 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply

Rhyming poetry is a challenge but you have impeccable rhythm.  This was a magnificent piece, CR!!!!!!!  No doubt in my mind your daughters are safe beneath your wings. 

posted by Troosha on May 3, 2008 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply

I want to cry...this is beautiful  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 2, 2008 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful, wonderful work.
 I can see you and your treasures. 

posted by Kolekshuns on May 2, 2008 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

hey shelley

A great way to treasure.. wonderful write.

Thanks for dropping by earlier and great to see you in my blog.

posted by whirlwindaffair on May 2, 2008 at 6:54 PM | link to this | reply

I'll guide your way!   Moon

posted by magic_moon on May 2, 2008 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

Smooth sailing imagery my friend! sam

posted by sam444 on May 2, 2008 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

this is too cool!!! the images are awesome!!!

posted by RomaKay on May 2, 2008 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

I love this poem...
...it has the cadence and momentum of a ballad.

posted by metalrat on May 2, 2008 at 4:29 PM | link to this | reply

posted by jmh256 on May 2, 2008 at 4:18 PM | link to this | reply

Good work, despite the freakin' rhymes LOL

posted by Ariala on May 2, 2008 at 3:28 PM | link to this | reply

very original

posted by NighthawkNY on May 2, 2008 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply