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posted by CRShelley on May 2, 2008 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply | report abuse

Wow....I liked the repeatition of find her...very good.

posted by jessica44774477 on May 2, 2008 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply | report abuse

.............

posted by cmhnord on May 2, 2008 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply | report abuse

I'm looking.

posted by scriber on May 2, 2008 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply | report abuse

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 3, 2008 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

A truly, truly Mermaid of a poem, my dearest Purple U

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 2, 2008 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on May 2, 2008 at 6:18 PM | link to this | reply

wow. i love the way you write!!

posted by RomaKay on May 2, 2008 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Purple

You are real royalty...good to hear from you again...I am happy you are doing well...Missed you

posted by Color_Your_Life on May 2, 2008 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

The insecurity of personal uncertainty, Mermaid. It can sometimes be

quite debilitating.  Your kindness and love shines throughout this poem, Mermaid.

posted by saul_relative on May 2, 2008 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

Very wise, J...nice work!

posted by _teddypoet_ on May 2, 2008 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on May 2, 2008 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

  For the soulful pieces you write day after day....

posted by Troosha on May 2, 2008 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

purple

yes and that free never goes away

posted by lustorlove on May 2, 2008 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

purple mermaid

yes you said it - losing someone is the worst..

posted by whirlwindaffair on May 2, 2008 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

Your talent inspires me

You are an awesome poet. Like Sam(becoming my fav saying) You are one of my favorites!! Solita

posted by ace2inspire on May 2, 2008 at 4:01 AM | link to this | reply

i'll never let go...of someone i love so much!!!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 1, 2008 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

Letting go the hardest thing in the world...you captured it so well Jen!

posted by Wigopa_ on May 1, 2008 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

posted by TerAmerica on May 1, 2008 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

Loss is so difficult! How is my lovely family today? I love you all so much! Stef's big day is approaching. I love you Shae!  Grandma

posted by sam444 on May 1, 2008 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Jen, sometimes we never let go...it's like an indelible mark on our hearts.  This touched me ~ So vivid and graceful, elegant and the video and song ~  ~ u Jen... Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 1, 2008 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Dearest Mermaid, again another beautiful poem,  what can I say that I have not said?  You are poetry my friend :-)

posted by Sinome on May 1, 2008 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

meeeeeenu, you said so well.....

posted by 9STAR on May 1, 2008 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

the truth of this speaks through your words

posted by jefco on May 1, 2008 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful write, keep sharing. From my  to your .

posted by cmhnord on May 1, 2008 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply