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It's a very evocative image!
posted by
Antipodean
on April 30, 2008 at 8:31 PM
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Thank you for the comment!
I wrote this poem on a bus from Santa Cruz to San Francisco shortly before sunset, and I was referring to that almost ethereal haze that settles down anticipating nightfall, particularly in spring/summer; it isn't quite smoke, but more of a soft shadow
posted by
NighthawkNY
on April 30, 2008 at 8:23 PM
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A very
interesting effort. What do you mean by demi-smoke?
posted by
Antipodean
on April 30, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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