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Awesome! Amazing! Your stlye content and concept off the meter!!
posted by
Mystereo
on September 30, 2010 at 8:57 PM
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very lovely..
posted by
starr_childe
on May 4, 2008 at 3:10 AM
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Sinome-I'm 'catching up'-so one comment for both of these! Beautifull---
the sadness comes through and the Beauty remains! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 30, 2008 at 1:06 PM
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Beautiful and heartfelt tribute !
posted by
afzal50
on April 29, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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Beautifully written
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 29, 2008 at 11:06 AM
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What a wonderful tribute. Heartwarming and heartbraking at the same time. Thanks for reading me and commenting. Yes, next time I will slam the door right in their faces.
posted by
vogue
on April 29, 2008 at 6:44 AM
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sad but beautifully written...
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 29, 2008 at 3:14 AM
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a lovely tribute sinome
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 29, 2008 at 1:28 AM
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nice piece!
posted by
lestate7
on April 28, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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Very touching tribute..
Fireflys are my favorites...Loved this you are a master in imagery!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 28, 2008 at 9:02 PM
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This is so graceful, loving and captured my heart. I always am lost in your imagery, you are a master. Have a restful night. You are a fantastic poet! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 28, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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This is a great line ...
"Even to cry with you was such painful pleasure." Beautiful and very touching ... so sorry for your loss.
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 28, 2008 at 8:32 PM
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Sinome ~ this has touched my heart in a very deep way. Oh! You are so tender and loving in your voice and by your endearing poetry. This one has literally brought tears. Just stunning! ~ wonderful dedication
Elyse (you are a valuable friend)
posted by
elysianfields
on April 28, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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S i n o m e, pathos and beauty, rain and sunshine, all at once
"Even to cry with you was such painful pleasure", "never loose that feisty willingness to fight". Superb!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 28, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 28, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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Lovely Sinome..don't worry, u don't lose good friends permanently..
temporary parting can actually be mutually healing of the unintentional hurt :) ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 28, 2008 at 7:34 PM
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Excellent tribute! With a dash of excellent reflections!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 28, 2008 at 7:24 PM
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I have a quit date in one month. I need to quit smoking and you need to keep writing beautiful poems.
posted by
jmh256
on April 28, 2008 at 7:23 PM
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