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I was magnetized to your poem, it's a fantastic job!
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edytka1974
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April 27, 2008
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Very beautiful Jen. mom
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sam444
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April 26, 2008
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Awesome as ever!
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Kolekshuns
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April 26, 2008
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purple
like a good man
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lustorlove
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April 26, 2008
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My husband came in and caught me crying!
You do very well , luv, capturing the mood and blending the songs. I'll probably play and read it again so I can cry at will. I feel this one personally, Jen. I promised never to contact "him" ever again. That's a long long time for one who left me, whom I loved and always will. SO this one "I get" personally.
CEE 
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LadyCeeMarie
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April 26, 2008
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
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April 26, 2008
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Purple Mermaid
I always like the footnotes that you post. Makes you see things in a different perspective.
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whirlwindaffair
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April 25, 2008
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Oh, this carries such a sadness ~ but --- reality can bring greys --- This is moving --- and very poignant!!!
u Jen
~Elyse
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elysianfields
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April 25, 2008
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some times we got to wait forever
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9STAR
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April 25, 2008
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