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Oh how awesome,...I could see and sense all around --- this is beautiful poetry ~  ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 30, 2008 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

My Dear Bro'--your Haiku is wonderfull and your poem started off-so very
beautifully-then sadness came in! Both-beautifull reads! My partner always has to 'take a peep'-and then harm is done! They really do like to be left to themselves-(only my humble opinion.) But well done you--that they have chosen your place to nest!Wonderfull!God Bless.Shalom from your Sis-Chris.

posted by Scramble on April 26, 2008 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

Curiosity killed the finch! Bravo! You appreciate the birds!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 26, 2008 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Kola Neil..this sure shows that you have compassion for the little winged ones too..Lovely work.!

posted by wigopa on April 25, 2008 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

Spring is such a glorious time of year.  sam

posted by sam444 on April 25, 2008 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Splendid and creative indeed !

posted by afzal50 on April 25, 2008 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

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