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- Go to In places LEAVES r rich green.Elsewhere tiny buds R ready to explode.Birds
Oh how awesome,...I could see and sense all around --- this is beautiful poetry ~

~ Elyse
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elysianfields
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April 30, 2008
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My Dear Bro'--your Haiku is wonderfull and your poem started off-so very
beautifully-then sadness came in! Both-beautifull reads! My partner always has to 'take a peep'-and then harm is done! They really do like to be left to themselves-(only my humble opinion.) But well done you--that they have chosen your place to nest!Wonderfull!God Bless.Shalom from your Sis-Chris.

posted by
Scramble
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April 26, 2008
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Curiosity killed the finch! Bravo! You appreciate the birds!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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April 26, 2008
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Kola Neil..this sure shows that you have compassion for the little winged ones too..Lovely work.!
posted by
wigopa
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April 25, 2008
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Spring is such a glorious time of year. sam
posted by
sam444
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April 25, 2008
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Splendid and creative indeed !
posted by
afzal50
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April 25, 2008
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