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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Krisles! You almost make me blush...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 11:06 AM
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Only
real ladies still swoon, Elyse, which you are, without a doubt...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 11:04 AM
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Re: Oooh!
Thanks for the compliment, BC-A!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 11:01 AM
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Re: Intriguing...
Thanks, cheugon!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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Thanks, sam, I'm glad you thought it overcame its deficiencies in the end...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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Often in my dreams, TAPS...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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Re: Sometimes
Sometimes the laws of nature seem suspended, Halfelven...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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Well, that's quite a compliment, vogue...thanks! I'm not a good judge of my own stuff...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 10:54 AM
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, OTA...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2008 at 10:52 AM
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posted by
Krisles
on April 25, 2008 at 7:16 PM
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Nautikos
I think the construct of this one....the continuity of the flash/light, echo/sound...is brilliant..... but, it is the whole of it, and that it has garnered comments of "romantic", with which I would agree....giving it the warmth of soul to go with the cool of mental construct......well, you are into master class here.
posted by
Krisles
on April 25, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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Now this is sooo romantic, I swoon ~ WOW
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 24, 2008 at 8:47 PM
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Oooh!
In a flash, I see and hear excellence!
posted by
BC-A
on April 24, 2008 at 6:05 AM
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Intriguing...
...and romantic. Nice job.
posted by
metalrat
on April 23, 2008 at 7:50 PM
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Deep, intriguing and laden with illusionary imagery. Other than that it was okay. lol sam
posted by
sam444
on April 23, 2008 at 1:41 PM
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Only in your dreams, Nautikos.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 23, 2008 at 9:52 AM
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Sometimes
Sometimes it seems to.
posted by
Halfelven
on April 23, 2008 at 8:24 AM
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Oh, that's a great one. I can only admire, read and learn.
posted by
vogue
on April 23, 2008 at 7:51 AM
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beautiful Naut..
~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 23, 2008 at 7:28 AM
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