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As I read this again

I have to say, this is something in which I think about very seldom.  As we walk past so many, enough to never fully care to count the number...We stop and finally decide to say hello, as we may have chosen the perfect one.  In a nice but thrilling ride this hit me, I thought I'd share...It makes me wonder if my Mother never passed my Father at that moment in time.  The things we think about...

posted by jpart122500 on April 25, 2008 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

Wow Jen, I can add any more but I sure endorse the comments. Striking!  Shae is out doing a wonderful job again. We can be so very proud of her. A rose and a gem. How lucky can we get. Hello my Stef! 

posted by sam444 on April 21, 2008 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Reads like 'the sad anatomy of a love affair'.

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 21, 2008 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Purple

WOW!  I truly enjoyed this piece....  so much behind a single word such as "hello" or "goodbye". 

posted by Troosha on April 21, 2008 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

How to tell you how wise you are ?

posted by afzal50 on April 21, 2008 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

To some it's so easy

Some people say hello and goodbye as if they are commenting on the weather. To me the very act of saying goodbye is like donating a body part...but sometimes you have to cut certain relationships out of your life...even though it might be so painful.

Thank you for your inspirational poetry!

posted by WesterinkElmarie on April 21, 2008 at 3:08 AM | link to this | reply

Love, the relationship beginning with a hello and ending in goodby is journey after journey to finding perfect love is so well expressed by dear Purple. that is the Mermait of Blogitville

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 21, 2008 at 3:02 AM | link to this | reply

In our search for the perfect relationship we unfortunately go through

many of these hello to goodbye stages; excellent work my dear Jen; thank you and do take care

posted by mariaki on April 21, 2008 at 2:22 AM | link to this | reply

absolutely right

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posted by whirlwindaffair on April 21, 2008 at 2:00 AM | link to this | reply

wow sweetie, I think this is one of your very best ...

and timely for me .... love this

posted by VictoriaP on April 20, 2008 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed this

No need for a book, or a movie...Everything that was needed to express in this piece was done very well.

 

Missed you too

posted by jpart122500 on April 20, 2008 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

Wow Jen ~ this has to be draining ~ such passion and emotion and reality all over the verse ~ Angel ~ You are a very wise one indeed ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 20, 2008 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

well spoken

a relationship from beginning to unhappy end

posted by Loribeth215 on April 20, 2008 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

take time to look deeper, some time it may be good.......HAHAHA

posted by 9STAR on April 20, 2008 at 6:44 PM | link to this | reply

hello dear one what a special talented and feeling dear you are.

  

posted by Kabu on April 20, 2008 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

purple

so sad but true

posted by lustorlove on April 20, 2008 at 6:31 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful..

The circle of love..exquisitly done..Excellent work Jen.

posted by Wigopa_ on April 20, 2008 at 6:06 PM | link to this | reply