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Good Poem
great job i love how
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JSkeldon
on April 22, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Good Poem
great job i love
posted by
JSkeldon
on April 22, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Good Poem
great job i
posted by
JSkeldon
on April 22, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Good Poem
great job
posted by
JSkeldon
on April 22, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Good Poem
great
posted by
JSkeldon
on April 22, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Beautifully written. I just loved this descriptive poem full of the most fantastic images. You brought to life for me that sunset...the feeling of the fog and the colors in the sky... I swear I felt the mist touching my skin... Oh and that ending, with the ship reaching the sea.... hope, completion, ... Amazing! great job!!!!
posted by
Sinome
on April 19, 2008 at 2:22 PM
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WriterofLight ~.~
Beautiful piece...stunning imagery. Very well done! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 19, 2008 at 12:09 AM
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Great Job!
"the foghorns sing down the darkness"..... I love it when you guys come up with timeless, as well as priceless lines. This one is gorgeous!
posted by
CRShelley
on April 18, 2008 at 9:48 PM
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