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_very touching ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 18, 2008 at 10:12 PM
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posted by
VictoriaP
on April 18, 2008 at 4:03 PM
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"don't worry tho'-I'll be all right"--that feels akin to remarks I used to
make-wich now I know were 'little wight lies'! Well done.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 18, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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this is such a sad description, yet wonderfully turned into words !
posted by
pelagus
on April 18, 2008 at 6:31 AM
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cr
very different
posted by
Lanetay
on April 18, 2008 at 6:25 AM
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Beautiful poem ...
Sometimes I feel claustrophobic outside (like the sky comes down on me) when I am down or lonely ... Pretty weird feeling!
posted by
AnaEmiliaMarina
on April 17, 2008 at 11:22 PM
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Aw Shelley, after reading your post...am missing my mum and dad too!
A lovely poem.
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 17, 2008 at 9:32 PM
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I like the way you write. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 17, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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CRShelley
I liked that a lot, and I'd love to get something like that from one of my kids I tell ya. Great post my friend
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 17, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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Striking imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 17, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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Very good, intense and no rhymes! LOL I like it!
posted by
Ariala
on April 17, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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