Go to Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head, Again!
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WOW
posted by
cmhnord
on April 12, 2008 at 7:05 AM
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This is sooo adorable, so dear, so endearing...It brings a tear to my eye - moved me
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 11, 2008 at 8:11 PM
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Oh my goodness
I really felt the meaning of your wonderfully adoring poem. I love it - Bravo, Bravo, Encore, Encore - write on dear chap -
group hug
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on April 11, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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Great poem
I really liked the poem. It sure is amazing how each reader perceives someone else's writing. I took a different angle. The times when there is no sun are the times when we are alone, and therefore without a shadow. My take on this is to always be aware of someone close to you, for one day they will not be there? Never take someone for granted. Because they can not be seen, does not mean that they are not there. Seek spiritual connections rather than physical ones. Great poem!
John
posted by
NYMarine
on April 11, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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CR ~.~
A wonderful poem -- full of life and love... with a subtle truth at the finish. Marvelously written. Thank you for sharing.
Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 11, 2008 at 1:53 PM
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LOVED IT!
posted by
AnaEmiliaMarina
on April 11, 2008 at 9:38 AM
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BEAUTIFUL ... I loved it!
posted by
AnaEmiliaMarina
on April 11, 2008 at 9:38 AM
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Very lovely and well written! Poignant-sorrowfull at the end!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 11, 2008 at 8:54 AM
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What a great concept followed by excellent imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 11, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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VERY TRUE
posted by
Star5_
on April 11, 2008 at 8:15 AM
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CR
You only have shadows
When your life’s filled with sun.
A crisp, simple rhythm with a wonderful message!
posted by
Troosha
on April 11, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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when I read this poem
all i can think about is the purity in children. I love it!
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 11, 2008 at 8:08 AM
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I love this!!!!
The last line is really magical, the whole poem makes me think of fairy tales and Peter Pan, Only in a more homey and tangible way. Very enjoyable
posted by
Kobriel
on April 11, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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Profound as usual !
posted by
afzal50
on April 11, 2008 at 7:18 AM
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