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Re: I really liked your special birthday anniversary poem - nice job BC-A

posted by Rhisiart_Inside_Out on April 13, 2008 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

In the last dream of my mother, her face rejuvenated into a youthful radiant look. It led to my special birthday anniversary poem for her memory on my blog.

posted by BC-A on April 13, 2008 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

This moved my heart Richard ~ what a touching tribute..what a great friend you are

posted by elysianfields on April 11, 2008 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful Tribute!

posted by Wigopa_ on April 11, 2008 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply

Wow. That's very well done -- and wrenching.
It's strange how 14 years, or 24 years, or whatever, can feel like yesterday.

posted by strat on April 11, 2008 at 1:10 PM | link to this | reply


posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on April 11, 2008 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you all for your comments
I woke up the other day after having a dream with Lance in it. I realized it was the 14th anniversary of his passing. So because it always makes me so sad I decided to express it through poetry.

posted by Rhisiart_Inside_Out on April 10, 2008 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

Reminded my heart of my deceased mom. So sad. So true.

posted by Winged on April 10, 2008 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Ouch
This one hurt my heart. Very beautiful ode to Lance

posted by SEEDLINGS on April 10, 2008 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 10, 2008 at 3:38 AM | link to this | reply

WEll expressed and heart felt !

posted by afzal50 on April 9, 2008 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

sad but sincere

posted by Star5_ on April 9, 2008 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply