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Weatherwise-this sounds so familiar--Well written!Chris.

posted by Scramble on April 6, 2008 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Warning...
So rich and beautifully written as only you can do...

posted by Inspired8 on April 5, 2008 at 9:23 PM | link to this | reply

inspiring...

I went and wrote "instinct has no concious" after reading this poem

THANKS

posted by twomany on April 5, 2008 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

sun is not hiding, he is having his own little time with the beauty of
earth and resting

posted by Star5_ on April 5, 2008 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem CR,  the images are powerful and so vivid, I could smell the wetness in the air and feel your storm aproaching.  Fantastic work!

posted by Sinome on April 5, 2008 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

The storm comes with a rhyme, too! LOL

posted by Ariala on April 5, 2008 at 5:40 PM | link to this | reply

awesome picture painted!

posted by TheWifey on April 5, 2008 at 5:05 PM | link to this | reply

love the way it builds...nice

posted by jefco on April 5, 2008 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

So vivid..thanks..i better run..

posted by ash_pradhan on April 5, 2008 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

Haunting climatic imagery!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 5, 2008 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply