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very well said

posted by star4sky5 on April 3, 2008 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

Striking imagery!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 2, 2008 at 2:41 PM | link to this | reply

This is good!
Makes me long for summertime! Good Job!

posted by CRShelley on April 2, 2008 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

extrordinarily sad...
you capture the moment of loss, and never lose sight of the fact that you're in a poem. 

posted by FineYoungSinger on April 2, 2008 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply