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We always want that half a chance...
I like this one a lot...because it reminds me of my current situation...I wish the one I long for would give me even just that half a chance...

posted by djtwreckz on April 2, 2008 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

Amazing poem CR, loved the hopeful quality of it. 

posted by Sinome on March 31, 2008 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

has a very 30s imagery to it. love it.

posted by thecryptkeeper on March 31, 2008 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

outstanding, un selfish and beautiful

thanks for sharing your thoughts

in such a poetic way

twomany

posted by twomany on March 31, 2008 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

This is exceptional! I adore it! If we all could have half a chance!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 31, 2008 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply

lovely poem of longing.

posted by FineYoungSinger on March 31, 2008 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply