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And thanks too, to Dave, Chris (my UK sis, et al) who R unnamed in new poem

SHALOM

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posted by salem8 on April 7, 2008 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

Such a beautiful feeling, this love you described is wonderful. Many mothers would love to have it. Your mother was very fortunate to have you

posted by pelagus on March 31, 2008 at 1:58 AM | link to this | reply

I can hear how much you loved her and cared for her Neil--and I feel sure

she knows too!Say it to her-in church-quietly in your mind-here as you have done-she knows. God bless you always-Shalom.Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

You are a most wonderful son and such an enduring tribute. I see how your daughters radiate love. sam

posted by sam444 on March 29, 2008 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

God bless you Punstar ~ This brought me to tears... How utterly beautiful your tribute here ~ How utterly beautiful

Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 29, 2008 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Ah well! The memory is cherished! Nice to see your pictures again! Sitaram, Neil!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 29, 2008 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

punstar

When birthdays of our lost loved ones roll around we all tend to second guess what we could have or should have done differently - what things we might have said while they were still here. Your poem is a beautifully outpouring of love for a mother lost but never forgotten.

posted by Troosha on March 29, 2008 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

My payers with you....

posted by 9STAR on March 29, 2008 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

nice to see you Ariala. Thanks

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posted by salem8 on March 29, 2008 at 5:09 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work...hope she had a good birthday!

posted by Ariala on March 29, 2008 at 4:50 AM | link to this | reply

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