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Krisles, I am hugely pleased that my little haiku should stimulate you to such a delightful response, itself a poem, really - and if I had any talents in that regard, I would certainly attempt it...

posted by Nautikos on March 28, 2008 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

Seriously, this cries out to be done in calligraphy with a very faint watercolor in the background.....it's very meditative......  I can see it clearly done a little differently on silk, rice and handmade paper....beautiful iced colors....blues/silvered greys/heathered violets or lilac/that strange green the sky can get ....I don't know, I just really like it a lot.  Okay, I've said I was snow starved!

posted by Krisles on March 27, 2008 at 6:54 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, TAPS. And no, just down to the Lake...

posted by Nautikos on March 27, 2008 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Krisles, I'm glad you liked it...

posted by Nautikos on March 27, 2008 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

What an image that gives, Nautikos.   Have you been down to the sea again?

posted by TAPS. on March 27, 2008 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos
And this is wonderful.....what a perfect place for such dreaming..... The imagery is perfect....and gave me a chill; but I love the silence.

posted by Krisles on March 26, 2008 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you sam, just trying my hand at this...

posted by Nautikos on March 26, 2008 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lovely haiku, Naut
Thanks, katray...

posted by Nautikos on March 26, 2008 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Most excellent Naut. You are multi-talented!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 26, 2008 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely haiku, Naut

posted by Katray2 on March 26, 2008 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply