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I guess it about the icy side of the heart mind and soul of man.
posted by
Mystereo
on October 10, 2010 at 7:04 AM
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Thank you, serendipity!
posted by
Nautikos
on March 28, 2008 at 9:03 AM
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Thank you, BC. I appreciate that!
posted by
Nautikos
on March 28, 2008 at 9:01 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Krisles...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 28, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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This is a really great poem. I like the line about the rat. It really drove it home.
posted by
serendipity09
on March 27, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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Hi to you. You write awesome haiku!
posted by
BC-A
on March 26, 2008 at 2:38 PM
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Nautikos
(Picture a delighted clap of hands) Clever! I liked this a lot!
posted by
Krisles
on March 26, 2008 at 2:05 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Justi...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 26, 2008 at 6:31 AM
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Thanks, Elyse, I really appreciate that...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 26, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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Re: Was she saying you have no heart?
Glad you like it, cheugon...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 26, 2008 at 6:29 AM
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Our lives have many twists and turns, TAPS...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 26, 2008 at 6:27 AM
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Re: Nice bit of poetical thought
Thanks, Kay...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 26, 2008 at 6:26 AM
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Nautikos
This is a powerful poem. I won't say more than that except very well done.
posted by
Justi
on March 26, 2008 at 3:56 AM
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what an awesome haiku ~ wow what power in your words...very Good
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 25, 2008 at 5:33 PM
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Was she saying you have no heart?
That wasn't nice! Nice haiku, though!
posted by
metalrat
on March 25, 2008 at 5:18 PM
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Nautikos, I hope this is not inspired by personal experience.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 25, 2008 at 1:03 PM
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Nice bit of poetical thought
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 25, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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