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haunting, stunning, very vivid
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on March 17, 2008 at 10:49 PM
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I can feel with the character in this poem.
posted by
BC-A
on March 17, 2008 at 2:46 AM
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Well done, chiq. And 'inebriated' works for me. Sets the stage, as it
were. How else to to convey a mood of giddy celebration without debasing it, overanalyzing it, or making it heavy with verbiage?
posted by
saul_relative
on March 15, 2008 at 11:21 AM
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It is beautiful, chiq
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 15, 2008 at 6:06 AM
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Poem works but delete "alcohol'
Like "enibriation" of the moment, and don't really care if you write when you're drunk if you write a good poem.(I drink and write all the time, but I don't tell anyone). Look it, you are not reporting the News, and I don't care how you got to this experience. However, if you think you need a poetry license to drink and write, I'll send you one.
posted by
jfm32
on March 15, 2008 at 5:29 AM
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