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very good work reminds me of a lot of things mostly the will to live

posted by spinner on March 15, 2008 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

Richard ~.~
I imagined the same as Elyse -- birth, water... Very nice, indeed. Thank you for sharing.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 15, 2008 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, this is vivid...imagery is stunning...reminds me of birth, re-birth, storms and calm ~ This is a very poignant poem. Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 14, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply