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Awesome...Oh the deer are prevelant here in my neck of the woods. They are beautiful to witness, with their innocent and striking graceful movements. Great poem ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 2, 2008 at 9:20 PM
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Thanks. I also did that so delibrately slow down the reading of the poem, in keeping with how slowly time itself seemed to be passing.
posted by
WriterofLight
on February 27, 2008 at 8:39 PM
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Re: Written well!
Thanks! I certainly had chills waking up and seeing a deer standing over me!
posted by
WriterofLight
on February 27, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Written well!
Almost haunting.. Gave me chills..
posted by
tyleness
on February 27, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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Sound imagery. I love nature and felt so warmed by your poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 27, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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Well done right down to how the lines are broke to give you the feel of just how sudden and wonderous it was!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 26, 2008 at 10:45 PM
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You caught the moment well
posted by
white-cossack
on February 26, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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posted by
Samantha39
on February 26, 2008 at 7:42 PM
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I really like this one!
posted by
flappergirl
on February 26, 2008 at 7:41 PM
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I really enjoyed this poem. I grew up on the land & wild deers were plentiful so I can really appreciate your experience.
posted by
Trene
on February 26, 2008 at 7:38 PM
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Beautiful....
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 26, 2008 at 7:31 PM
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