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nicely written - it's sad how harsh words so often spoil what could be good!

posted by starr_childe on May 19, 2008 at 1:38 AM | link to this | reply

Very, very creative poem!
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posted by Kolekshuns on May 9, 2008 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

great picture, great poem Thank you for your visit earlier!

posted by NighthawkNY on May 3, 2008 at 8:26 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Very insightful my dear taps. I always love to read your
Thanks so much, vickip. 

posted by TAPS. on April 30, 2008 at 3:30 AM | link to this | reply

Very insightful my dear taps. I always love to read your
latest.  Thank you!

posted by VictoriaP on April 29, 2008 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

Fabulous!

posted by _Decshak on April 20, 2008 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Timely
Thank you fluidbeauty.  I'll try to do that.

posted by TAPS. on April 17, 2008 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

Timely
You should post your poetry more often. I really like your writing style.

posted by fluidbeauty on April 17, 2008 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

Cornstalker, I have found that it is worth going back and reading bloggers very first posts.  Often, a new blogger will start out with something really good, or information about themselves, or their very best poem and because no one yet knows they are there it is completely missed.  I have often advised a blogger that they should repost that first one because no one read it. 

posted by TAPS. on April 10, 2008 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS: I did some recent blog-cleaning myself and discovered there are so many new readers and writers to blogit that I could recycle some of my "stuff" too.  In doing so, I realized that "anything worth doing is worth doing well" and I feel we've all done our best, so why not be green and recycle? One should revisit one's work now and then to truly appreciate one's own talents!!

posted by cornstalker on April 10, 2008 at 12:48 PM | link to this | reply

posted by bluehands on April 1, 2008 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Soft words reap so many more benefits. Another beautiful
Thanks, vickip.

posted by TAPS. on March 21, 2008 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

Soft words reap so many more benefits. Another beautiful
work Taps ... thank you!

posted by VictoriaP on March 21, 2008 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

Taps
This is a very good poem. The picture shows the total contrast with the words. Great.

posted by Justi on March 21, 2008 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, olhip50, for such a nice comment.  I have not met you before.  Thank you for visiting me here because now I know you are there and I will be reading you.

posted by TAPS. on March 20, 2008 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

Wnderful work. Soft spoken words well said. olhip

posted by olhip50 on March 20, 2008 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem.  Soft words are only heard by good listeners though .  The addressed in this poem may be aiming at the hard of hearing too.

posted by AardigeAfrikaner on March 18, 2008 at 3:41 AM | link to this | reply

Softly spoken, to turn away the screaming and walk were there is peace. I liked it a lot! Thank you for visiting eariler.

posted by Wigopa_ on March 2, 2008 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS..................
Just browsing around looking for something good, and I found you.  hahaha  Well, this is wonderful and well-written.  You are such a talented lady.

posted by MaggieMae on February 28, 2008 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Loribeth215 on February 27, 2008 at 11:39 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS. ..reminds me of a softly spoken word turning away wrath..a sure way
to silence one yelling (well, maybe not always, but quite often..:).....I like the twist at the end, too...

posted by Rumor on February 27, 2008 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS-that's so lovely! And I love what appears to me to be-a twist in the
Scramble, I'm often tempted to throw in a twist in the tail.  LOL.   Most times I try to resist as I think it detracts from any beauty there in.

posted by TAPS. on February 27, 2008 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS-that's so lovely! And I love what appears to me to be-a twist in the
tail! Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 27, 2008 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

strat
Thanks so much.   I really have enjoyed taking photos and matching them to poems that I write.  Most all of the pictures are my own.  If I use something off of the internet, like that one of the prism, I try to remember to post where I got it.  I once had a prism just like that one.  My husband bought it for me in a shop in Jackson, Wyoming when we were visiting the Teton Mountains.  It disappeared several years back so I had to find the picture on the net.

posted by TAPS. on February 27, 2008 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

I love how you move into that last, surprising line!

posted by FineYoungSinger on February 27, 2008 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

Powerful work, TAPS!

posted by PoetRaye on February 27, 2008 at 10:56 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful! Both the picture and the words!

posted by strat on February 27, 2008 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning Taps! Soft spoken words are everlasting!  sam

posted by sam444 on February 27, 2008 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

I have always had an appreciation for your poetry.

posted by Original_Influence on February 26, 2008 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely writing! You're quite a poet!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 26, 2008 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

Didn't expect that ending Taps!
Blew me away!  Wow!

posted by ginnieb on February 26, 2008 at 6:52 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with elysian!
Wonderful!!

posted by Yeshuan on February 26, 2008 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

Elyse, Thank you so much for reading my poems.
I so appreciate your kind comments.  I really love your appreciation.

posted by TAPS. on February 26, 2008 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful...

posted by _teddypoet_ on February 26, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Oh this is sooo rich...beautiful ~ and the ending,  ...I do like your writing and style.  ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 26, 2008 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

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