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Deep piece red blaze ploice chase, frame is steed running moonshine fast.

posted by Mystereo on January 23, 2009 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Interesting tri-path/ I only look confused

as you can tell me and the computer are fighting lol. I wrote this about my grandfather during his Prohibition days. His black stallion and him where chased by the law countless times when he ran his moonshine. I wanted to write something for him that would make him smile. Glad you liked it.

posted by Wigopa_ on February 24, 2008 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Interesting tri-path/ I only look confused

Hello again,

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posted by Wigopa_ on February 24, 2008 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting tri-path/ I only look confused

1. Runner--isn't this a person who runs on two legs? Unless I.m missing inside info--what's this got to do with the rider and the horse?

2. So out of the gate (if there is one--tres interesant!)We presume there is a horse and rider, while not presumed, here, the essence of language-the title.

3. 2nd stanza, "moonshine" already has 3 driections: title and 1st stanza, while 2nd stanza acts as 3rd, using "moonshine in pocket" as swivel of the intention of the idea--as if there were one!

Wonderful construction,and maddening ideas, and I'll go out drinking with you anytime!

posted by jfm32 on February 24, 2008 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply