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You will always be remembered

posted by AardigeAfrikaner on February 24, 2008 at 10:44 PM | link to this | reply

I had so much fun with the rhyme. It is a swell poem. One that can be read over and over. Thank your for such a cool rhyme.  {Thank you so much for your kind words on my poetry!}sam

posted by sam444 on February 24, 2008 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

I liked the voice
But it was a little long for me, while I understand you had to go thru the cycle (it was there already) of what you had to say. So, I'm still wondering if you are writing to yourself, or a reader (like me). Now, maybe I'm a short person with big ideas. I like poems that are cut down to my size so I don't have to get a stepladder.

posted by jfm32 on February 24, 2008 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply

another good one

posted by AlienFemale on February 24, 2008 at 3:11 PM | link to this | reply

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