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To much for one to bear you made your point deep passion fire desire claims

all of me for this write bring a heart to it's knees.

posted by Mystereo on January 24, 2009 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

I am speechless!

Such depth of emotion and sincerity. So well written. A long poem that flows like a swift current. If you weren't using metaphor and instead, speaking of a real person, he is one lucky S.O.B!

posted by metalrat on February 24, 2008 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: will believe in your love even if I can not see

Thanks 7 stars, :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome --

Thank you soulspeaker, :-) you are so sweet,

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome sweetheart you are one fine poet indeed..........

as are you beautiful Mermaid :-) Thank you for your kind comment and G-d bless you too.

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:46 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Less :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

a faithful reader back again

thank you for taking the journey with my work

posted by Thomas_Cornish on February 24, 2008 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Sam, as always your words are like a balm for my ego :-) Good night to you as well :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Reminds me of the good ole genre of romantic poems!

Thanks Straightforward, that is a great compliment :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Elyse, thank you :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautiful SIn :)

Thanks Shanlizer, and I will come back to Second Life soon, the concept is fascinating :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Wow

Thank you Lionreign, I am glad you liked it :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you Troocha, as always you are too kind :-) Von vogage to you , all the best.

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Yes a Very Nice Piece or should I write PEACE

Thank you Rhisiart, glad you enjoyed it :-) I also enjoyed your poem and your picture, Thank you

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Soul Builder

You are so kind, I am glad you liked my take on it, comming from you a complimant is a great honor. :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 7:07 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks Wana, you are so nice. :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Wow..wish someone was saying this to me :) - Ash

You are sweet Ash, thanks :-)

posted by Sinome on February 24, 2008 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

Wow..wish someone was saying this to me :) - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 24, 2008 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

my heart just flips for this poem!!! great post!!!

posted by wana_phils on February 24, 2008 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

This is an awesome depiction of love! It is the genuine item not the frenzied passion of lust! You are certainly no airhead! This is exactly the type of relationship one should aspire to! Lets hope those who seek happiness read this! Its the only way to love!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 24, 2008 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

Yes a Very Nice Piece or should I write PEACE

You made my heart glow and my mind grow

posted by Rhisiart_Inside_Out on February 24, 2008 at 1:17 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

A truly stunning piece! I liked how you took your reader through each part of the day - your love building and becoming stronger.

posted by Troosha on February 24, 2008 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

Wow

beautiful and genuine, utterly superb.

posted by lionreign on February 24, 2008 at 1:44 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful and so romantic...pleasure to read

posted by quietguy7 on February 24, 2008 at 1:20 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful SIn :)

And a thank you for dropping by, I hope you do sign up, I have just typed out a little info for you regarding Second life, So here goes;

Ok so you have all your clothing items and so on in your Inventory.

To search for anything press the search button and type in what you want i;e CLothes, shoes, hair, jewelry, textures and so on you can search for anything and everything you like :) even mature stuff.

If things get too dark you can go into world (up the top) Force Sun, and then choose your day type i;e night sunrise, sunset, noon.

If you need to go somewhere just to sort through your inventory (inventory workes just like folders so you can oreganise them) Search for a Sandbox, here you are alloud drop and click on the boxes in you inventory.

You can also build by pressing the build button, choose your shape and click it on the ground. From here you can strech, rotate, position and down the bottem of your building box is textures, what type of shape you want it to be. Sounds complicated?

So into the communication box down the bottem ( after closing the build box) inside there you can find someone, Type in

Serenity1988 Destiny

and I shall pop up click on me and add, then you will see a box saying waiting, I will except this when I relog. So if it turns bold it means that person is online.

Any other specifics then drop me a line :)

Welcome to your second life and Remember, You can always make money from anything you do!

See you in there :)

posted by Shanlizer88 on February 23, 2008 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

Eloquent and Passionate ~ Stunning Imagery ~

~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 23, 2008 at 10:27 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you for leaving a comment to my blog entry

do what you do and stop becuse you do a good thing

posted by Thomas_Cornish on February 23, 2008 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

Reminds me of the good ole genre of romantic poems!

posted by Straightforward on February 23, 2008 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, this absolutely wonderful and laced with awesome imagery. I could grab a bunch of lines from this poem but the one that grabbed was "in the darkness I will see better." incredible depth even on its own outside the poem it is a powerful affirmation. You rock my friend. And I get to say good night to you as well. sam

posted by sam444 on February 23, 2008 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

MMMmmmM you can write!

posted by lestate7 on February 23, 2008 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome sweetheart you are one fine poet indeed..........

you are amazing dearest Sinome...

i see in this an unconditional love...

I will believe in your love even if I can not see
reality in your words just yet,

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on February 23, 2008 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome --

This is simply beautiful -- showing honesty and openness to love. Very well written.