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posted by AlienFemale on February 24, 2008 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poetry! It was a delight to read this!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 24, 2008 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

This was a delight to read. I am in awe of the straightforward approach and the message could one on either side. I think in the course of my sojourn I have been on both side. I so look forward to reading more of your work. Bravo! sam

posted by sam444 on February 24, 2008 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

mea culpa. eh?

posted by Straightforward on February 23, 2008 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

posted by tyleness on February 23, 2008 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Very good!
I love the progression of queries that lead to the final realization.

posted by soulspeaker on February 23, 2008 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

 so good!

posted by lestate7 on February 23, 2008 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply