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poetry morps to that person's exp. not too wordy either
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on February 23, 2008 at 3:31 PM
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no doubt you can write! but your name kills me....
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on February 23, 2008 at 3:30 PM
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Re: Azur
Glad to hear it. Desire can burn you up, but, oh the sweet agony.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on February 23, 2008 at 1:30 PM
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Re: EX_TURPI
It's definitely a bit wordy, I know. I've thought about messing around with it, but thought better of it. That's the way it came out, so daddy ain't going to give baby major reconstructive surgery.
Thanks for giving it a try.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on February 23, 2008 at 1:26 PM
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Re: sam444
Thank you. Sometimes I wonder how people might read this. Of course, I knew what I was talking about at the time, but I guess I assume other people will be in a dark as far as the metaphors and also the flow and cadence. So it's good to get this kind of feedback.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on February 23, 2008 at 1:23 PM
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Cunning, Oh my, I hear you.
Freeing yourself to see the desirable yearning.
posted by
Azur
on February 22, 2008 at 6:14 PM
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I will reread this and then I should appreciate a trifle better.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on February 22, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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Exquisite imagery. I was in all the way and the cadence was easy to grasp and I even noticing myself creating my own cadence as the imagery affected me! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 22, 2008 at 12:36 PM
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