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poetry morps to that person's exp. not too wordy either

posted by bluehands on February 23, 2008 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

no doubt you can write! but your name kills me....

posted by bluehands on February 23, 2008 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Azur

Glad to hear it.  Desire can burn you up, but, oh the sweet agony.

posted by CunningLinguist on February 23, 2008 at 1:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: EX_TURPI

It's definitely a bit wordy, I know.  I've thought about messing around with it, but thought better of it.  That's the way it came out, so daddy ain't going to give baby major reconstructive surgery.

Thanks for giving it a try.

posted by CunningLinguist on February 23, 2008 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you.  Sometimes I wonder how people might read this.  Of course, I knew what I was talking about at the time, but I guess I assume other people will be in a dark as far as the metaphors and also the flow and cadence.  So it's good to get this kind of feedback.

posted by CunningLinguist on February 23, 2008 at 1:23 PM | link to this | reply

Cunning, Oh my, I hear you.

Freeing yourself to see the  desirable yearning.

posted by Azur on February 22, 2008 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

I will reread this and  then I should appreciate a trifle better.

posted by EX_TURPI on February 22, 2008 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

Exquisite imagery. I was in all the way and the cadence was easy to grasp and I even noticing myself creating my own cadence as the imagery affected me! sam

posted by sam444 on February 22, 2008 at 12:36 PM | link to this | reply