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Very wise introspection..evolution of maturity nicely captured in a poetic
form..Ty, I think this is your best series so far (outside of your humor)..in real life, though, it is my humble opinion that forgiveness is best for everybody, the sooner the better, but it must be genuine, I know how you're feeling..rest assured better days are ahead, this is a period of growth, and thank you again for your genuine praise of my work, best, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 21, 2008 at 3:38 PM
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The hope of forgiveness and reconciliation! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 21, 2008 at 12:41 PM
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Thought provoking poem. Is he still alive at the end of the poem? Thanks
for sharing.
posted by
ger_musser
on February 21, 2008 at 11:55 AM
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ty
Rising from the ashes - not always easy to do but certainly possible if both people set their mind to it. Nicely done!
posted by
Troosha
on February 21, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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Good poetry!
posted by
Katray2
on February 21, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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To seek forgiveness
Not an easy task once they are gone. Good way to point that out.
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on February 21, 2008 at 7:47 AM
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kinda spooky I see moss on oak tress and tomb stones decayed by time
posted by
spinner
on February 21, 2008 at 7:13 AM
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