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Your betrothed has rented 3 chambers in your heart?
Love lives forever, even ones who have done the heart damage. I hope her 'rent' expands in scope and bounds and fills your heart to overflowing, never to leave you but drowning in her utmost love and devotion!
Cee 
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LadyCeeMarie
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February 17, 2008
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Beautifull Neil! I look forward to the next! Shalom.Chris.
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Scramble
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February 10, 2008
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Another Very Good Writing!
The name "punstar" is genius!!
Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head
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CRShelley
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February 9, 2008
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I ought to say also that I belong to online & local poetry groups-this &
the next were PROCESSED with the input form practising poets, and tgherefore appear "very good." So, the next one should follow in the next 24-36 hours, with some comments from my poet-readers. SHALOM
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salem8
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February 9, 2008
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Sam, perhaps I began teaching in 1980 as "an English Master" in Africa
Of course, there's always much to learn from Americans (another English language, for instance). Thanks much
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salem8
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February 9, 2008
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You are on a roll my friend. It is so good to see so much work from you! This poem is very, very good! sam
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sam444
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February 9, 2008
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