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I second the phrase of Wiley John, in knowing that you were a lady of class and grace! this is a well written piece! And I love the image of writing and then letting it burn, watching the smoke fade away!

posted by kmer on February 7, 2008 at 3:04 AM | link to this | reply

WileyJohn

That's the fun of writing--to be able to bring out emotions of the reader by painting a picture with words.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2008 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS

I just knew you were a lady of wonderful grace and class, and the most wonderful of writers whether poetry or prose, and I felt compassion for you reading that lovely post my friend

posted by WileyJohn on February 6, 2008 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS.

posted by jacenta on February 6, 2008 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

Thanks for reading.  It was so long ago that I cried.   Now I laugh--when I remember.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2008 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Sam.

Even when I wrote the poem several years ago, I was over him and just trying to remember what it was like.  The poem was inspired by another blogger's loss and recalled to me my own long-past experience.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2008 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble

It is just a poem.  I am fine.  Actually, the poem is several years old.  It is the second time around for it.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2008 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Such a Beautifull piece TAPS! I do hope that you are all right? Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 6, 2008 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS

posted by Nautikos on February 6, 2008 at 6:32 AM | link to this | reply

I was trapped in the imagery and it was fantastic. Letting go is hard but this expressive poem is well written.  sam

posted by sam444 on February 6, 2008 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS my love...my sincere apology really.....

I must have said "Thank you kind Sir" to the very kind Sam444 on my first day here...what a shame really...thank you for understanding my dear....

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on February 6, 2008 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply

Purple_Mermaid

I'm glad you figured out I'm not a man.  I was wondering whether to embarass you or just let it go.  LOL.  I've done that before.  With some of the names a person just can't tell for sure.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2008 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Yeshuan

What a nice comment.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2008 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply

I say you are a sensible and a very endearing man Taps...

I always find a sensitive man a remarkable person...I admire your work dear.Thank you so much for digging thru my pieces love, I'm honored...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on February 6, 2008 at 12:58 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful.

What a brilliant depiction of letting go!!

posted by Yeshuan on February 5, 2008 at 7:07 PM | link to this | reply