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Your so right. I try to avoid the violence on television by surfing,

but now the commercials stunt us just as the show does. Too much

blood. Too much hate. I wish we could all love each other.

posted by Winged on May 25, 2008 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you for checking it out.  I thought that I had the feeling down pretty well but wanted the opinion on it of someone that has lived there and actually knew first hand if I had it right or not.  Thanks again!

Damon

posted by Damond on February 26, 2008 at 1:19 AM | link to this | reply

 Thank you for directing me on this poem, which I somehow missed. It's very descriptive. Says in few words, what many whole page news articles, doesn't.

posted by AlienFemale on February 24, 2008 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi

Thank you! Thanks also for reading.

Damon

posted by Damond on February 22, 2008 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply

Hi

amazing amazing piece

posted by writerspirit on February 22, 2008 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Damon

Thanks Justi, I don't like the reason for the content either.  I do think, though, that it needed to be written.

Thanks again!

Damon

posted by Damond on January 23, 2008 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Damon

It is so sad what is happening all over our world. I like your poetry. I don't like the reason for the content but it is done very well.

posted by Justi on January 23, 2008 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: churches burning

Thank you!  I appreciate your kind comment on Violence.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 22, 2008 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

churches burning

this poem rivals some of my worst nightmares!  Impressive that you creat such vivid images in relatively few words.

posted by kmer on January 22, 2008 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sad and true.

Thank you for commenting on this piece Katherine Ann.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 22, 2008 at 12:58 PM | link to this | reply

sad and true.

posted by Katherine_Ann on January 21, 2008 at 5:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scary stuff this but so well put together.

Kabu, thanks so much for commenting on Violence.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 21, 2008 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Mindless violence that we need to combat not with violence but with

Straightforward I do agree with what you say, and that we need to combat it in every way that we can.  Thanks for commenting.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 21, 2008 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

scary stuff this but so well put together.

posted by Kabu on January 20, 2008 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

Mindless violence that we need to combat not with violence but with

exposing what this violence is all about and analysing it at its roots. What say?

posted by Straightforward on January 20, 2008 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: this is very graphic writing, one could believe you were standing there

Thank you so much.  I appreciate all the positive feedback that I have gotten on this one.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 18, 2008 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

this is very graphic writing, one could believe you were standing there

seeing for yourself the misery of war torn countries. Well done.

posted by Kabu on January 17, 2008 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks for commenting.  It is only my opinion as to what it would be like to live in those third world countries.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 16, 2008 at 11:36 PM | link to this | reply

very graphic descriptions

posted by leaderspeaker on January 16, 2008 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I trust this is not as real as it reads.............

Hi Mariaki,

No itsn't real for me at all, but I suspect for a lot of people it probably is.  Thanks so much for your kind comment.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 14, 2008 at 1:53 PM | link to this | reply

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No I was only thinking about what it must be like for a lot of families to live in some of the third world countries.  I am glad that the thoughts came through so well you felt that I might have been there and had the experience.

Thanks so much for your kind comment on this one.

Damon 

posted by Damond on January 14, 2008 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

I trust this is not as real as it reads.............

very well done; thank you for sharing

posted by mariaki on January 14, 2008 at 6:51 AM | link to this | reply

Did you have that experience? You express the sentiments well, regardless.

posted by EX_TURPI on January 14, 2008 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: rather heavy....

Thank you!  I suppose that you must have sseen the one reply I made by what you said in your comment.  I hope that it wasn't extremely painful and that you got over it okay.  Thanks again for commenting.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 13, 2008 at 11:02 PM | link to this | reply

rather heavy....

i felt my heart shrinking while i was reading dear..i've been in one of those horrible plights...i know how it sure hurts... deeply expressed dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on January 13, 2008 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Wow!

I was thinking that that this might be what it would be like to live in one of the Third World Countries when I wrote it.  It is diefinitely a different type of write for me.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 13, 2008 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Well said !

Thank you Afzal.

Damon

posted by Damond on January 13, 2008 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

Well said !

posted by afzal50 on January 13, 2008 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!

I don't know what to say! Very emotional piece.

posted by CRShelley on January 13, 2008 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply