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Re: Beautiful & thoughtful..growth entails breaking from the past, from the

ASH, thanks for the support--and this poem is about past and present, and how we can find mening despite what numbs us all. Shalom and Shanthi Aum. Neil your bro.

posted by salem8 on January 13, 2008 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Neil...

Hey there CRS-thanks for the Good MOnring and Peaceful greeting. Ten times ten for thee. Neil

posted by salem8 on January 13, 2008 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello my Dear friend! You sound weighed down with the worlds problemns!

Thank U Dear Sis. The poem is really not about me--I identify with death & dying around me, but I also look for the beauty & positives...maybe I will write a paragraph about this poem. Thanks for the opportunity and Shalom

posted by salem8 on January 13, 2008 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

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Greetings Dear One-- Sam444, my poems are sometimes long in making, not always influenced by the present, but this one was thinking Science and religion. Shalom from Neil

posted by salem8 on January 13, 2008 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply

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thanks for every flower, Afzal. Salaam and Shalom

posted by salem8 on January 13, 2008 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful & thoughtful..growth entails breaking from the past, from the

chains of circumstances..that is fundamental to evolution.. from your friend always..a soul-brother from past life, blessings, Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on January 13, 2008 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Neil...

Good Morning! Shalom.

posted by CRShelley on January 13, 2008 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Hello my Dear friend! You sound weighed down with the worlds problemns!

I love your writing but I FEEL your sadness! It is the blame of us ALL--mankind/womankind--everyone and yet it hangs heavy on your shoulders! Shalom and God bless from your UK Sis.

posted by Scramble on January 13, 2008 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning, Neil! This a very poignant poem. I can't help but sense something deep is occurring. sam

posted by sam444 on January 13, 2008 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on January 13, 2008 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply