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Chilling!

I love your style! The descriptions are subtle, giving a clear image without hitting the reader over the head with it. I almost wish I hadn't been able to picture it so clearly though - sad and scary all at the same time!

You should check out draco101 and Pat_B - They're some of my fave fiction writers on this site, and both are super talented!

posted by Sira890 on December 20, 2007 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

rape sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!sam

posted by sam444 on December 20, 2007 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply