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Smartdog:
Thanks and lots more to come.
Ed Patterson
posted by
MedicineFlower
on December 18, 2007 at 4:31 AM
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Medicine
I love the sentence fragment. It gives the reader a wake up call. A gentle slap in the face.
I hope you share more.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on December 18, 2007 at 12:02 AM
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Lots more coming . . . lots and lots and lots.
posted by
MedicineFlower
on December 17, 2007 at 12:05 PM
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tHE EXAMPLES BRING TO LIGHT THE BENEFIT OF PROPER CRITIQUE AND REVISION>>GREAT INFO>>>SAM
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2007 at 11:03 AM
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