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Soulofapoet
I wrote this poem in 2002 about a woman I met in a club, and as soon as she walked over to me, and ask me to dance, I knew right then it was going to be hard to say goodbye. I wrote the poem that night after I got home from the club about four AM. A friend of mine in Springfield Missouri wrote a song with it, only heard it once but it was a great feeling, to hear my words to music, thanks for all of the post. Wayne.!

posted by Soulofapoet on December 17, 2007 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Chris Scramble--who was purified as a poet by her pain.Shalom

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on December 17, 2007 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Soulofapoet-very well written-but so sad! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 17, 2007 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

goodbyes are so sad, but you put it so beautifully,

posted by jesse_jean on December 17, 2007 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

To say goodbye
Good stuff.  And talk about synchronicity, check out my latest post.  Weird.  joab

posted by joab1 on December 17, 2007 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

Soul
How very, very sad but nicely done!

posted by Troosha on December 17, 2007 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

soulofapoet
 excellent

posted by richinstore on December 17, 2007 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

Excellently done

posted by Katray2 on December 16, 2007 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on December 16, 2007 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

Wayne, soo beautifully composed & well-worded..brought tears to my eyes
from past memories..well-done fellow-poet ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on December 16, 2007 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful.........sad

posted by star4sky5 on December 16, 2007 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

OH, THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL>>>>SAM

posted by sam444 on December 16, 2007 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply