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BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!! SAM

posted by sam444 on November 17, 2007 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on November 17, 2007 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

soulofapoet
I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing

posted by richinstore on November 17, 2007 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

 Ole buddy, I read your about me page. I also think that the lord is the conducter of my pen. I play guitar and sing, have all my life. David in psalms said that "HE" is the conductor of my stringed instrument and I truly understand where David was comeing from not that I am comparing my self with David, though If I had it to do with a bible figure in which I truly believe, it would be David. If you don't mind I will attempt to give some constructive critacisum. More editing, I have been told this by other blogit members when  my wife don't edit for me, use your spell check it will help the readers further enjoy your work don't take me wrong I like your work read alot of it, good stuff straight from the guts, I like that. keep up the good work my friend. Spell check is the abc curser in the left top hand corner of your tool bar. I did not no where it was, beings I am computer stupid thought it might help. God bless soul of a poet / spinner P.S. never made it past the tenth grade my damn self framed a many houses in my day. 

posted by spinner on November 17, 2007 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply