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Metaphor or not, I lived by the ocean for 9 years, and I can still hear it in my dreams.  Good stuff.joab

posted by joab1 on November 27, 2007 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

You have talent girlfriend!

posted by Layna_Ann on November 18, 2007 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

In college, I had a professor who who asked if this was really about the "ocean."

I looked at him blankly and replied, "yes, should it be about something else?" He never did tell me what that was.

I was so young and naive then. Over the years I would go back to that moment and wonder what it was he was talking about and then I had my blonde ah hah moment . . . Sex, he thought I was really writing about sex.

No, it was rather simple. It was about the first time I saw the ocean. I was in high school and it is a moment I will never forget.

posted by flappergirl on November 14, 2007 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful !

posted by afzal50 on November 13, 2007 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

flappergirl
This is wonderful. I think it touches us all and that makes us feel good in our memories.

posted by Justi on November 13, 2007 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

flappergirl, this is beautiful indeed!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on November 13, 2007 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful, flappergirl
I remember it too.

posted by TAPS. on November 13, 2007 at 4:00 PM | link to this | reply

flappergirl

posted by richinstore on November 13, 2007 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply