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Kayzz
You make "swimming the length of destiny" sound like a journey so full of potential for goodness and grace. 

posted by Troosha on November 8, 2007 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman
Isn't it strange that humans so long for freedom and yet, down deep they fear the reality of it.

posted by TAPS. on November 8, 2007 at 12:29 PM | link to this | reply

another great one

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 8, 2007 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

Kyaz
a "hemisphere of salvation" - I liked that.  Good strong piece.

Be well,
-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on November 8, 2007 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzz

Total applause to this piece.

Bless

Regards

 

posted by UncharteredSoul on November 8, 2007 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

kayz

posted by richinstore on November 8, 2007 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent
thank you for sharing

posted by mariaki on November 8, 2007 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re:
Beautiful !

posted by afzal50 on November 8, 2007 at 5:10 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written.

posted by RobertMadang on November 8, 2007 at 5:01 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem. Cool ideas and concepts.

posted by BuddhaDemon on November 8, 2007 at 4:49 AM | link to this | reply