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Decshak
Ah you're right...I guess in my head "cosmos" is plural...

posted by Jokester on November 8, 2007 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

richinstore
Ah...another rose for my vase!  ty!

posted by Jokester on November 8, 2007 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

Katzs
Thanks!

posted by Jokester on November 8, 2007 at 1:10 PM | link to this | reply

"A cry to the cosmos" and "it was telling them" are out of sync. Cosmos and
them need to be the same number of things, grammatically.  Otherwise, this is fine....

posted by WindTapper on November 8, 2007 at 2:21 AM | link to this | reply

jokester

posted by richinstore on November 7, 2007 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

well written.katzs

posted by katzs on November 7, 2007 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply