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Thanks Flappergirl!!

posted by Antonionioni on November 8, 2007 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

always interesting.

posted by flappergirl on November 8, 2007 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Brian and Eyes!!

Better get on with tonight's - it's getting late already!

posted by Antonionioni on November 7, 2007 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

Antonion

You write well, DEEP at times but truly well.

Bless

Regards

 

posted by eyeshaveears470 on November 7, 2007 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

:)

Yeah and talking about Shakespeare, there was a Monty Python Book (The combined edition of Big Red Book and Papperbook) that was called: The Complete Works of Shakespeare and Monty Python. I volume: Monty PYthon.

By the way, a few blogs disappeard from my favourit folders. Have you noticed the same?

posted by Brian76 on November 7, 2007 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

Ha ha - very good Brian - and so relevant -w ell done!

Mind you, with your encyclopedic knowledge of Monty Python, I bet you thought of that straight away!

posted by Antonionioni on November 7, 2007 at 12:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi everyone. How are you FYS - I'm OK - nearly bedtime.

If it's a tongue twister for a native English speaking person then what can I say?

Now that's a tongue twister:

Bruce's Philospoher Song

 

posted by Brian76 on November 7, 2007 at 12:25 AM | link to this | reply

Hi antoini

good post

Lou

posted by Cameraeye on November 6, 2007 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on November 6, 2007 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

the 'ing' rhythm of this poem is awesome

posted by Matie on November 6, 2007 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

antonio

posted by richinstore on November 6, 2007 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

Hi everyone. How are you FYS - I'm OK - nearly bedtime.

A good few bets succeeded tonight I might add.

TAPS, you made me laugh with that comment - I know what you mean. I like to read aloud sometimes. The problem could be not knowing when certain sounds are given any weight or not. Fotr instance, solitary in my poem should be pronounced 'solit'ry' not 'solitary' in order to preserve the ten syllable effect. Also, I put 3 rhymes in each line before the end rhyme as you no doubt noticed - that makes it a hell of a tongue-twister, i expect!!!!

 

posted by Antonionioni on November 6, 2007 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

Antonionioni

That's a hard one to read outloud.  I'm one of those wierd people who likes to read poetry outloud.  I had a bit of trouble with this one.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on November 6, 2007 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

Well, you must've put some time on this complicated little darling....

my o my....  nice. :)

posted by Pat_B on November 6, 2007 at 2:27 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Tony

I'm Back.

posted by Brian76 on November 6, 2007 at 1:55 PM | link to this | reply

Hey Tony! Just checking in...

How's things lately?

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 6, 2007 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply