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Hi
I'm here, only in the last week I was not commenting almost nothing except about Dave. I'm not in the mood for deep thoughts kind of sad. But I'm here and read you, only i don't leave comment each time.
posted by
Brian76
on November 4, 2007 at 4:08 AM
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Good read
posted by
draco101
on November 3, 2007 at 9:49 PM
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Poem in a different style.
posted by
A-and-B
on November 3, 2007 at 5:59 PM
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Kayzzaman, waiting for her defining moment like waiting for Godot..
How perfectly apt. Mellifluous prose.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 5:53 PM
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posted by
Amanda__
on November 3, 2007 at 5:48 PM
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this is brilliant
posted by
flappergirl
on November 3, 2007 at 4:16 PM
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Kayzz
Extremely well done!
posted by
Troosha
on November 3, 2007 at 1:40 PM
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Re: kayzzyman
whoops the wrong person I am sorry
posted by
Lanetay
on November 3, 2007 at 10:56 AM
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spinner
for some reason I was think of the Statue of Liberty
posted by
Lanetay
on November 3, 2007 at 10:55 AM
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WOW,
Great word usage...so much feeling...nice!
posted by
Sincerity_Anna
on November 3, 2007 at 10:02 AM
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Beautifully written
posted by
RobertMadang
on November 3, 2007 at 8:25 AM
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interesting in deed!
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on November 3, 2007 at 8:21 AM
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hmmmmm
Thats freakin awesome...... have a good day....
posted by
whiteknight3128
on November 3, 2007 at 7:51 AM
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I feel empathy for her,
this was beautiful, thanks for sharing
posted by
callista22001
on November 3, 2007 at 6:32 AM
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Great poem!
posted by
afzal50
on November 3, 2007 at 6:21 AM
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kayz
i feel sorry for her.
posted by
richinstore
on November 3, 2007 at 5:46 AM
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