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A  for being brave an courageous..  I enjoyed your poem

posted by nemonemo on October 31, 2007 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

IC great poem
resisting shows strength of character well done; thanks for sharing

posted by mariaki on October 30, 2007 at 3:46 AM | link to this | reply

A poem of hope.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 30, 2007 at 2:47 AM | link to this | reply

:)
Thanks for sharing.

posted by Brian76 on October 29, 2007 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poem!
As I read it I wondered if you could take poet licence and get rid of the word 'be' before 'beholden'....you then get the meaning of the phrase 'to be beholden' but the rhythm is neat and the meaning feel more layered and laiden with possibility.  Just a thought....

posted by Celeste632 on October 29, 2007 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

good poem, easy to relate to.

posted by FineYoungSinger on October 29, 2007 at 1:17 PM | link to this | reply

good work we are all tempted by the flesh / spinner

posted by spinner on October 29, 2007 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

Touching work, easy to identify with - well done.

posted by Antonionioni on October 29, 2007 at 12:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Icpoetrynu, don't be too hard on yourself. Everybody's human
Thank you for the support. I appreciate it. I guess you get to an age you feel you should know better - but I guess temptation has no gender, age or discrerempcies.

posted by icpoetrynu on October 29, 2007 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

Icpoetrynu, don't be too hard on yourself. Everybody's human

I've walked the line of temptation of things, but to be tempted is not to give in. I just try not to keep temptation around me.

Beautiful poem. 

posted by Zena77 on October 29, 2007 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply