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all I know is sand fly's were as big as chickens they would take over the world good work / spinner
posted by
spinner
on October 29, 2007 at 1:14 PM
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couldn't really get a grasp on anything accept we are more than our outer layer - I'll reread again - some nice comparisons in it though - thought evoking.
posted by
icpoetrynu
on October 29, 2007 at 1:09 PM
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Re: Chris, I've done a lot of free association writing, so I get it.
dilettantes and word anarchy converts, but i only eat dark chocolate sprinkled on my breakfast - it's a teeth f*****r
posted by
chrisja
on October 29, 2007 at 1:03 PM
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Chris, I've done a lot of free association writing, so I get it.
I like the name "spew poetry".
posted by
Zena77
on October 29, 2007 at 12:33 PM
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Good and imaginative use of words and rhythms - I enjoyed it a lot.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 29, 2007 at 12:32 PM
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zena
i'm amazed that you stuck with this piece - i remember reading a book of surrealist poems which are automatic writings uncensored and unedited by the rational mind - well that's what i thought i'd try with this - it was so hard to take control away from the gatekeeper in the rational part of the brain, it resents it bitterly, and wants to interfere and change things all the time, and it rejects practically everything (undoubtedly with good reason) - but i found the exercise liberating as well because out of the chaos, new structures and insights are hinted at or emerge fully blown - it's an interesting process, and i respect its value, even though it's also alienating
posted by
chrisja
on October 29, 2007 at 12:25 PM
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Chris, I liked the rhythm of this when I got into it.
the heels of the girls on the street, the nurse I didn't get,, but I liked the ending, that clothes have a lot to do with beauty. The presentation has a lot to do with it, too. That's true.
posted by
Zena77
on October 29, 2007 at 12:10 PM
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yeh zena and soul builder - i know what you mean
but it's 'spew talk' - word anarchy - thwarting penetration - permitting itself other freedoms - more viewings might not make things easier - swimming in the sound contours helps me a bit - but it's definitely arm's reach stuff, anti social
posted by
chrisja
on October 29, 2007 at 12:10 PM
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Chrisja
This confounds me! I will get at it again!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 29, 2007 at 11:45 AM
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Hm, Chris, I'm going to get back to this.
When I can read it more slowly.
posted by
Zena77
on October 29, 2007 at 11:38 AM
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