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I'm still trying to find the melody. I put away for a while because
it was driving me crazy, humming and tapping out rhythms, plus the words are not exactly where I want them, but basically, it's all there.
It feels like my story.
posted by
Zena77
on October 31, 2007 at 10:03 PM
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Zena, this is great... I can hear a melody---I wish I knew how your melody
went...this is just awesome....a great message! Does Traveller trail off?
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 31, 2007 at 10:00 PM
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Thank you, Richinstore!
I am a beginner, so I have a lot to learn. I haven't met the group yet, but I hope they will be patient with my efforts.
posted by
Zena77
on October 24, 2007 at 4:44 PM
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zena
good luck to you. hope it turns out fine.
posted by
richinstore
on October 24, 2007 at 4:34 PM
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Hi Soul Builder,
thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I feel like it needs a few more stanzas, and a "'finish".
posted by
Zena77
on October 24, 2007 at 4:06 PM
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Hi Troosha, thank you, like I said, neither poem nor the journey are done.
posted by
Zena77
on October 24, 2007 at 4:05 PM
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Zena........
This was nice reading!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 24, 2007 at 4:01 PM
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Zena
And what a beautiful journey it is!!!! Loved this piece!
posted by
Troosha
on October 24, 2007 at 3:01 PM
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