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Re: What's there to add?
yes, jfm - the communal poem idea, it's interesting - if you want to try it, i'd be game
posted by
chrisja
on October 27, 2007 at 1:11 PM
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What's there to add?
it seems to me the poem is finished. but you raise an interesting idea
for a communal poem: a circle of poets (no more than 3, tho possibly 5) get up to 2 lines each. Who gets to start and who follows is decided by straws or common consent. Each player gets no more than two lines which have to be written in 24 hrs, or they're passed. It would be intereting to see what we would have by the end of the week.
posted by
jfm32
on October 26, 2007 at 6:00 PM
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chrisja
Those worthless kids, the old people would say!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 24, 2007 at 3:08 PM
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Good rhythm..hmm, could be my Grandson..
Nah, he's only five..:)
posted by
Katray2
on October 24, 2007 at 10:15 AM
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Re: Chris
Troosha - that's why i'm curious about other suggestions - i think there are possibly many comical answers to where this 6 year old A.A. Milne reject will end up in life - for the record, I love rugby, I grew up in New Zealand, so I'm devasted by the way the All Blacks crashed out of the World Cup this year
posted by
chrisja
on October 24, 2007 at 8:41 AM
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Chris
You had me until "RUGBY" - that threw me off.
posted by
Troosha
on October 24, 2007 at 8:04 AM
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Interesting !
posted by
afzal50
on October 24, 2007 at 5:56 AM
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