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Re: This is nice
 I'm glad, sometimes it gets confusing like that so I was just checking...and you could have written it before everything else started happening. 

posted by celiaeli on October 26, 2007 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

I love memories like this!   I can relate, I have prattled on to my friends about how my husband when we were first dating dove under my car and fixed a hanging wire for me without my having to ask.  I think that's why I married him---he's handy.

posted by FineYoungSinger on October 25, 2007 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This is nice...
No no no!! The man I wrote about in this poem is NOT my ex-husband!! This was my first love- a REAL man who treated me with nothing but respect and kindless and love.

posted by Angela_Sargent on October 25, 2007 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 25, 2007 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

This is nice...
and true...I've been there...this is not the same one you talk about in your other posts is it?

posted by celiaeli on October 24, 2007 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

Angela

posted by Soul_Builder101 on October 24, 2007 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Nice love poem !

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2007 at 12:50 AM | link to this | reply