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Re:
Thank you draco! 

posted by Jokester on October 19, 2007 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nicely Written!
Thank you Sira...I'll be reading you too! 

posted by Jokester on October 19, 2007 at 5:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Julie
Thanks White!  I'll give him a "call"  

posted by Jokester on October 19, 2007 at 5:54 AM | link to this | reply

love the story, especially the style. even though its not told from the little girl's point of view, the style still changes to fit the mental emotion of the character. well done.

posted by draco101 on October 19, 2007 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

Nicely Written!
It's eerie. It's dark. And most importantly, it's entertaining! Can't wait to read more

posted by Sira890 on October 18, 2007 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

Julie
I'm OK now, that's until you post another one of your stories .... .... I think you should make yourself known to Enigmatic68 ~ he loves horror films, so I think your stories would be like bedtime reading to him

posted by White_Elephant on October 18, 2007 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Julie

Hi White Elephant!  'Tis ok, you can take a deep breath now, it's over...but another begins!  Thanks for the complement!  Spread the word if you think it's worthy....

Hugs

posted by Jokester on October 18, 2007 at 8:16 AM | link to this | reply

Julie
Yikes! .... can you make your story a little less haunting please??? ~ Oh dear! ... very nicely depicted though!! Good job

posted by White_Elephant on October 18, 2007 at 1:12 AM | link to this | reply