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Nice imagery
Your grammer needs a little work,but the subject and form are lovely.Try not to use "like" so much,is advice I recieved from one of my professors.I really enjoyed it!
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butterflybeebs
on October 19, 2007 at 5:46 AM
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I like your poems, but it's so hard to rank them. And I don't trust my English enough either to decide which should go into your book and wich doesn't. I'll just keep on reading.
posted by
Brian76
on October 18, 2007 at 11:25 AM
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posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 11, 2007 at 12:33 PM
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PrfDr.......
Very interesting to capture different approaches of people in the spotlight!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 11, 2007 at 12:11 PM
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PrfDrLove
I agree that kissing your loved one after a quarrel is the best way to patch up.
posted by
richinstore
on October 11, 2007 at 7:47 AM
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