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Thanks from those of us who aren't "a streak of piss"

posted by butterflybeebs on October 11, 2007 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

PS White Elephant, 'streak of piss' is not my invention, i's a well known

phrase over here! So I can't stop you using it. Be my guest!

posted by Antonionioni on October 6, 2007 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks people for your comments!!

I'm streaking over to post now!

posted by Antonionioni on October 6, 2007 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

but it's slowly getting to men...

capitalism needs everyone

Great post!

posted by pelagus on October 6, 2007 at 12:10 PM | link to this | reply

Antonio

Applauds all round.  Great post

Bless

posted by eyeshaveears470 on October 6, 2007 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

Well Done! Moon

posted by magic_moon on October 6, 2007 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

I just love the wit!

perfectly funny, sarcastic, witty and true... and oh a lovely sonnet too!

posted by nemonemo on October 6, 2007 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Nicely done. AmMused

posted by AmMused on October 6, 2007 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

That's absolutely excellent Tony! Hope those who might need to-read!

posted by Scramble on October 6, 2007 at 3:24 AM | link to this | reply

lovely poem ...i do not have that problem ..thanks god

posted by drohan254 on October 6, 2007 at 2:38 AM | link to this | reply

Antonionioni

If you don't mind, I'll be using the "streak of piss" remark myself! I loved that line ... hey, did you see those 2 streak of piss over there? ... sadly, I don't think it will reduce the males' fascination with them though! but good try onionioni anyway - now all you have to do is to convince some 1 billion men who just love those "size zero models" .... good luck!

posted by White_Elephant on October 6, 2007 at 1:07 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks everyone - and have a nice weekend.

I'll be posting later on after I come back from my day out.

posted by Antonionioni on October 6, 2007 at 12:58 AM | link to this | reply

Then why is there such a pressure to look like a drink of water, streak of piss ....gone! ..the imagery is so painting-like. Good job. Imagine the horrid rattle of two skeletal women dancing on a tin roof 

 

posted by Bhaskar.ing on October 5, 2007 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

Antonio

i'd love to hug a bag of flesh rather than a bag of bones!

posted by richinstore on October 5, 2007 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Tony -

I've always been interested in shapeshifters - but not these kind!

posted by sannhet on October 5, 2007 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Matie on October 5, 2007 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

You're welcome FYS!!!!

posted by Antonionioni on October 5, 2007 at 2:22 PM | link to this | reply

I love this!

thanks for posting it!!!

posted by FineYoungSinger on October 5, 2007 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Hee hee - glad you agree!

posted by Antonionioni on October 5, 2007 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

I with you I like a little something to hold when I wrap my arms around a woman / spinner

posted by spinner on October 5, 2007 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Antonionio

Bravo  A daily struggle for those of us who live in a well insulated shell!

posted by OneBetty on October 5, 2007 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply