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I would love to hear you sing this, Gypsy girl. You are talented!

posted by muser on October 4, 2007 at 3:33 AM | link to this | reply

Red head never give the heart to break, but to hold...

posted by star4sky5 on October 2, 2007 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent, RedheadedGypsy. I do not know how you would style it, but

by the third verse, I was hearing Sarah McLachlan or Natalie Merchant there.  Maybe Diana Krall.  Truly, good work...

posted by saul_relative on October 2, 2007 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

RedHeadedGypsy

If only I could hear you sing it.

posted by richinstore on October 1, 2007 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Well that was really good! I admire people who can write poetry or song lyrics. I just don't think I'm deep enough - I write too literally!

posted by Holy_Grail on September 29, 2007 at 1:53 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful.

posted by Justi on September 29, 2007 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

very nice

posted by White_Elephant on September 29, 2007 at 1:08 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Everyone...

I'm glad no one hated it lol. Strat...if you get a good tune going let me know. I can't write music, just words!

posted by RedHeadedGypsy on September 28, 2007 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Red.............

That is as firm a statement as I have ever read! If he tries, kick his behind! LOL!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on September 28, 2007 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I TEARED UP!!!

posted by riri0322 on September 28, 2007 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

That's great, Jolie.  I liked it!...  I'm gonna email you sometime this weekend.  Sorry its taken me so long.

posted by lovelyladymonk on September 28, 2007 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

Cool! I can here a couple of chord progressions for it now.

posted by strat on September 28, 2007 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

RedHeadedGypsy

That reads as if it would be very singable.  Good work.

posted by TAPS. on September 28, 2007 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

I like this, got a nice depth to it.  I believe with the right music behind it, it could make a great song.

Regards.

posted by eyeshaveears470 on September 28, 2007 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

posted by FineYoungSinger on September 28, 2007 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply